There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the complaints that have been made say why the reception area is important suggest how the reception area could be improved

Dera Mr John, I am writing to inform you about the discontinuity of my evening course. As you are aware, I am managing my time schedule between
work
and the history course.
Last
month, I got promoted to senior project manager in my present organization and I need to take care of ongoing projects.
Last
month, I tried my level best to balance my studies and
work
but I failed and was hospitalised due to
work
pressure. The doctor advised me to give up on either
work
or education. Since my parents are fully dependent on me
in addition
to some personal commitments. I would like to discontinue my studies to proceed with my
work
. Once all the issues are sorted out, I will continue my studies in near future. I am sure about the timeframe it takes. I will come and collect the course certification and other education documents which I submitted on my joining day. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Your’s Sincerely, Ann
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • moreover
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  • therefore
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • complaints
  • reception area
  • unwelcoming
  • signage
  • aesthetic appeal
  • directional signage
  • ticketing system
  • professionalism
  • feedback system
  • continuous improvement
  • welcoming atmosphere
  • efficient
  • clear signage
  • comfortable seating
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