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Some people think young people are not suitable for important position in the government while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on the positions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Leadership is a skill
that is
 not solely determined by age. It takes honour and integrity to be a good leader of a country. As
what
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people
 usually say, things are constantly changing in
this
 modern world. It is great that now, we see different types of
government
 officials in the world.
For example
, women are now given the chance to take important positions in
the
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authority which is a far cry from the traditional patriarchial society before. Nowadays, it is not unusual to see young
people
 playing vital roles as
government
 officials. Some
people
 think that it is good to observe
this
 refreshing change in our society. Since they are younger, they are capable of bringing fresh and new ideas that could potentially uplift our communities.
Also
, they have the endurance and eagerness to learn more in bringing the positive change that we have been wanting to see.
However
, some
people
 argue that older folk have the maturity and experience compared to our young leaders. Being an
authority
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 official is not an easy nor a simple task. It takes time to nurture a seasoned captain of the country. While being a young and enthusiastic leader is great but having a mature and steadfast leader of the
government
 is more important. In my opinion, age does not matter in telling who is better suitable to be
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 authority official.
Nevertheless
, I am in favour of giving a chance to the younger generation to prove their capabilities in becoming
government
 leaders. Youth is the hope of the upcoming generations and it is our responsibility to believe in them.
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