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Some people think that studying from the past teaches us nothing about today’s life. Others argue that the history is a value source of information. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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It is often claimed that history has an essential role in our life while people are only concentrating on current scenarios. According to my opinion, our ancestors travelled and experienced several critical situations and provide viable remedies to confront the challenges.
To begin
 with, a section of society believes that today's life is entirely different from that outdated past.
Moreover
, no similarities in their standard of living.
Firstly
, a wide range of technologies is available when we compare to the old generation. A recent study explains that we could have intense ways to capture umpteen opportunities if we could access some facilities of today in past.
As a result
, following grandparents' rules in new areas make an adverse effect.
secondly
, to be a part of a certain culture by history is easy. In a country with diverse cultures and religions is despicable without knowing ancient stories.
In addition
, in the past, people are supposed to be trusted at any time. I believe, that trust and genuineness are the foremost lessons we should learn from our formers. To conclude,
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