In many countries it is very easy to apply for and be given credit card. However, this causes some people to have problems with debt they cannot pay back. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In most nations, people can request
for
and have debit Change preposition
apply
cards
without any difficulty. However
, this
has
Add the particle
tohas
lead
to some individuals having challenges with the payment of their loans. Wrong verb form
led
This
essay will argue that despite the difficulties with the payment, the benefits of easily applying and having the card far exceed any drawbacks.
Firstly
, easy access to money is one of the enormous reasons people ask for credit cards
. This
is because as it is available, money can be accessed anytime, anywhere when the individual want
to make a transaction. Change the verb form
wants
Therefore
, it will not be difficult to pay for something purchased online or physically. As a result
, anything the person desire can be acquired since it will not be a problem to pay. Again people do not have to carry huge sums of monies
around which can be stolen or misplaced and so provides much safety. Fix the agreement mistake
money
For example
, it was announced that,
about 75% of Remove the comma
apply
the
German citizens have debit Correct article usage
apply
cards
which help them to transact businesses
even at night without any hindrance. Fix the agreement mistake
business
This
means that the acquisition of credit cards
are very essential.
Despite easy access to money and not walking around with cash, the request for debit cards
cannot go without a challenge and one of them is unnecessary spending. A key factor to this
is that, since the individual will be granted, he can purchase anything without sometimes taking into consideration whether that
truly Correct pronoun usage
he
need
it or it was just impulse buying. As Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
this
continues, the loan builds up and and
with time they tend not to be able to pay and so Remove the redundancy
apply
Replace the word
lose
loose
their properties to the banks. Correct your spelling
lose
For instance
, it was announced that the Ghana commercial bank is leashing out some houses and other properties they took from their customers who have default
payment of their loans at a Wrong verb form
defaulted
reduce
price. Change the form of the verb
reduced
This
has caused most of them to be homeless.
In conclusion, after examining the merits and demerits, it is felt that the ups far outweigh the downs. I will therefore
recommend that credit cards
be given when requested.Submitted by agozie2018 on
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