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compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. state which you consider to be the most effective . comics books radio TV film theatre Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays there is various way to get the news and each of them has benefits and drawbacks
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we can receive data when we follow them as media,
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 movies and television have the most efficiency.
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, youth are intensively exposed to media and films,
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, these are not helpful for them because they have always distracted,
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, students have been watching movies and tv shows and
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 they will get poor scores in their exams, one the other hand it would be useful if they manage their time to watch it.
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, they can earn good
information
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 when they are attending to tv
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, about countries and their cultures, jobs and workplaces, etc.
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, programs on TV sometimes are interesting and give us good
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 about our environment when I watched a wildlife documentary it made me think about how life is going and how animals and plants are affected by humans in Asia there is a negligible amount of Asian lion which is governments are regardless about.
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, Books have massive sources about any topics and we can achieve
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 with just reading a book,
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 these valuable things are cheap, the majority of individuals in my country ignore them which is really sad,
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, it was a research about reading books rate among adults in Iran and it showed only 4 per cent of the population read books and
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 statistic is horrible. In conclusion, there are a lot of procedures to get
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 and in
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 essay three of them are assessed.
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