Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school while other children receive too much pressure from their over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child. Why do you think some parents put too much pressure on their children to perform well at school? What do you think a role of a parent should be in their child education. Write at least 250 words
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Academic performance has always been a vital issue both
to
parent and their ward. Change preposition
for
High
number of youngsters receive little Change the article
A high
The high
support
from their parents
in
respect to their academic results, while others are excessively pressurized by their extremely zealous Change preposition
with
parents
and this
pose bad
effect on the child. The reasons why Correct article usage
a bad
parents
over
pressurized their kids and Change preposition
apply
also
their duties towards their child's academics will be discussed in this
essay.
To begin
, most
Change preposition
with, most
parents
force their children
to perform well in their place of learning due to their past life experience
. Most Fix the agreement mistake
experiences
parents
during their adolescent
performed badly in Replace the word
adolescence
school
and this
prevented them from acquiring and attaining their life goals. They believe their bad performance was due to lack
of interference and pressure from their guardian.So to prevent their youngsters from having Correct article usage
a lack
same
experience they compel them to perform well in Add an article
the same
a same
school
.To elaborate a young man in Abia State aspiring to be a local government chairman failed his election because he had no academic qualifications. Due to this
his Add a comma
,this
children
has
always been Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Add a hyphen
over-pressurized
over pressurized
, they are never appreciated for their little effort. He ensures they come back with nothing but the best results.Add a hyphen
over-pressurized
Secondly
lack of trust Add a comma
,Secondly
make
Change the verb form
makes
parents
to
constraint their young ones to do well in their place of study. Most Change preposition
apply
parents
do not believe,
when their Remove the comma
apply
children
tell them that they have read and covered their curriculum or when they say they have finished their assignment. They believe that each hour of the day should be spent studying. External tutors and online lecturers are employed to always teach this
child. And this
has made many children
to
lose interest in their Change the verb form
apply
school
work .
Furthermore
the role of a parent towards education Add a comma
,Furthermore
are
many Correct subject-verb agreement
is
first
is support
, parents
should support
their kids emotionally and spiritually. Show love and care while correcting their mistakes, and also
back up their efforts with prayers. Additionally
Add a comma
,Additionally
parents
should always provide books and necessary items like laptops and phone
and Fix the agreement mistake
phones
also
pay necessary
Correct article usage
the necessary
fee
needed in Fix the agreement mistake
fees
school
to avoid frustration.
In summary lack of trust in kids and parents
failures in past years has made most Change noun form
parents'
parent's
parents
to
force their wards but if Change the verb form
apply
parents
carry out their parental roles like providing finance and support
, youngsters will definitely do well in school
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