What do you think are the main causes of inequality between rich and poor nations in the world? What can be done to reduce this gap? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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between
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and underdeveloping countries, the factors contributing to the differences among the advance and
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, there are so many reasons that contribute to the rift between the wealthy and poor
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a researcher named Mark chi from China publish about the income of china, in his study he noted that the advancement in
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technology gives room for
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to build industry and a lot of things in the
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which boost the
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of the
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and makes life easier for the citizens and immigrants,
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,
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can bring some
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of inequality to the underdeveloped
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to the Factor.
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, the
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effect on the
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growth
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natural resources and the educational
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community
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lack basic
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the leader, and
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peers. The
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effect of
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State of America can not
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to the
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of Tanzania
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back to the
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, the ratio of
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has a major role in a
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is higher than the
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of active
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the
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will be lagging behind,
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will result in poor production, and
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from the product which
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the community
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and there is no staff to feel the space there will be
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in production which affect the
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economy
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growth
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. In conclusion, the major difference between
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and underdeveloping countries is
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in technology and
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,
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of both boost
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resources and make
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ahead of other. In my
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if the government can
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the
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and ask for help from the
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country
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the
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of
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will be equal and there won't be any form of oppression or rift between the countries.
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