You are moving to a new country ,write a letter to the accommodation agency to rent a house In your letter describe Yourself and your family Which area you would like to live in And what facilities you need in the house.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am excited to write
this
letter to inform you about my moving to Canada, Vancouver city. I will be travelling during the 2nd week of August along with my better half.
As you heard, we are very new to that place and not familiar with the city and locations since it is a huge capital and the best immigrants.Therefore
, we are looking at a quiet fine place without any traffic noise, in addition
, we cannot pay such
skyrocketing rents as we just gain a basic salary. Last
but not the least, we do not need any mind-blowing sceneries and luxury flats.
However
, I strongly recommended having a small and nice flat with basic facilities despite the busy traffic and costly rents. Firstly
, we need full furniture along with utilities as well and this
would help us to save the investment on them. We both always work from home therefore
, it is much needed to have better internet service and no matter how much they will charge.
I look forward to seeing your response with good news about the best flat with all the required facilities.
Yours Faithfully,
Lakshmi.Submitted by lakshma999 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite