You are moving to a new country ,write a letter to the accommodation agency to rent a house In your letter describe Yourself and your family Which area you would like to live in And what facilities you need in the house.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am excited to write
this
letter to inform you about my moving to Linking Words
Canada
, Vancouver city. I will be travelling during the 2nd week of August Check wording
Vancouver
along with
my better half.
As you heard, we are very new to that place and not familiar with the city and locations since it is a huge capital and the best immigrants.Linking Words
Therefore
, we are looking at a quiet fine place without any traffic noiseLinking Words
,
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;
in addition
, we cannot pay Linking Words
such
skyrocketing rents as we just gain a basic salary. Linking Words
Last
but not Linking Words
the
least, we do not need any mind-blowing sceneries and luxury flats.
Correct article usage
apply
However
, I strongly Linking Words
recommended
having a small and nice flat with basic facilities despite the busy traffic and costly rents. Wrong verb form
recommend
Firstly
, we need full furniture Linking Words
along with
utilities as well Linking Words
and
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, and
this
would help us to save the investment on them. We both always work from Linking Words
home
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home,
therefore
, it is much needed to have better internet service and no matter how much they Linking Words
will
charge.
I look forward to seeing your response with good news about the best flat with all the required facilities.
Yours Verb problem
apply
Faithfully
,
Lakshmi.Fix capitalization
faithfully
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Task Response
Task Response: Make sure you answer all parts of the task. Use polite, formal words. Give a clear request for the flat and a way to contact you.
Coherence and Cohesion
Coherence and Cohesion: Use one idea per paragraph. Start with who you are, then where you want to live, then what you need. Use short sentences and linking words.
tone
Opening and closing are polite and clear.
content
Letter shows the main needs: area, facilities, and basic plan.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite