Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting the usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Although

in recent days there

are

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cutting edge

technology

in

medicine

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fields, some

people

prefer

alternative

treatments

rather than go to the traditional doctor without

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of the consequence

on

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treatments

for cancer, pandemics or health system overburdened. In my opinion,

this

will be negative

to

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society. The ease with

people

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have access to

alternative

medicine

is dangerous as there

is

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not

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no

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studies to give a clear result of

effectiveness

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of these, so that, when

population

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choose

this

type of

treatments

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treatment

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there is not necessary

have

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an improvement in an illness.

Furthermore

, it can be said a balance between

technology

and normal doctor have improved

the

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life expectancy,

on the contrary

,

of

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apply

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the successful rate

either

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acupuncture or

homeopathy

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where is

not

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proof of the real result.

For instance

, there are studies to show

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the

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that

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alternative

medicine

appeal more

the

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placebo effect

what

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If

people

try to

use

more

this

medicine

, the world will have

more

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sick population. The main consequence of

this

is in the

successful

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rate

in

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treatments

will increase and in

illness

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illnesses

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like cancer is necessary

use

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traditional

medicine

with a mixture of

technology

as the science

testing

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the products before to

use

on

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in

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population

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showing objective results.

In addition

,

although

alternatives

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treatments

usually do not

use

pharmaceutical chemicals,

this

is necessary to control pandemics and does not

overburdened

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like recently show coronavirus times.

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, in

Chile

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most of the

people

that died were who do not

got

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the vaccination and

people

who

survive

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were vaccinated. In conclusion, for

people

is indispensable

go

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to

traditional

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the traditional

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doctor as is more reliable than

alternative

medicine

so that

medicine

and

technology

could show real figures of

successful

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.