Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting the usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Although
in recent days there are
cutting edge Correct subject-verb agreement
is
technology
in medicine
fields, some Replace the word
medical
people
prefer alternative
treatments
rather than go to the traditional doctor without think
of the consequence Wrong verb form
thinking
on
Change preposition
of
treatments
for cancer, pandemics or health system overburdened. In my opinion, this
will be negative to
society.
The ease with Change preposition
for
people
have access to Correct pronoun usage
which people
alternative
medicine
is dangerous as there is
Change the verb form
are
not
studies to give a clear result of Correct your spelling
no
effectiveness
of these, so that, when Add an article
the effectiveness
population
choose Correct article usage
the population
this
type of treatments
there is not necessary Fix the agreement mistake
treatment
have
an improvement in an illness. Unnecessary verb
apply
Furthermore
, it can be said a balance between technology
and normal doctor have improved the
life expectancy, Correct article usage
apply
on the contrary
, of
the successful rate Change preposition
apply
either
acupuncture or Change preposition
of either
homeopathy
where is Change the spelling
homoeopathy
not
proof of the real result. Correct your spelling
no
For instance
, there are studies to show Correct determiner usage
that
the
Correct your spelling
that
alternative
medicine
appeal more the
placebo effect Change preposition
to the
what
If Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
try to use
more this
medicine
, the world will have more
sick population.
The main consequence of Correct article usage
a more
this
is in the successful
rate Replace the word
success
in
Change preposition
of
treatments
will increase and in illness
like cancer is necessary Fix the agreement mistake
illnesses
use
traditional Add the particle
to use
medicine
with a mixture of technology
as the science testing
the products before to Wrong verb form
tests
use
on
Change preposition
in
population
showing objective results. Correct article usage
the population
In addition
, although
alternatives
Change the noun form
alternative
treatments
usually do not use
pharmaceutical chemicals, this
is necessary to control pandemics and does not overburdened
like recently show coronavirus times. Wrong verb form
overburden
For example
, in Chile
most of the Add a comma
,Chile
people
that died were who do not got
the vaccination and Change the verb form
get
people
who survive
were vaccinated.
In conclusion, for Wrong verb form
survived
people
is indispensable go
to Fix the infinitive
to go
traditional
doctor as is more reliable than Add an article
the traditional
a traditional
alternative
medicine
so that medicine
and technology
could show real figures of successful
.Replace the word
success
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