The number of animals and plants is decreasing at a dangerous rate around the world. What are the causes of the problem? What can be done to improve this situation?

Many

animals

and plants are facing extinction and the number of these living things

are

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dramatically decreasing all over the world. In my opinion,

this

phenomenon is

as

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a result of global warming and illegal human activities. I believe some effective remedies are to enhance our awareness

for

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environment

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and to set some regulations or laws as a

deterent

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deterrent

for these activities. One major factor

of

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some kind of specie's extinction is extreme weather and climate change which are caused by

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global

grobal

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global

warming.

Anual

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average temperature has been rising all over the world. Some habitats of

animals

and plants

has

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been decreasing or

has

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already vanished because of

rising

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sea level. Specifically, the arctic ice where polar bears live is melting and they can't sustain

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their

the

thier

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their

life without ice

block

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which

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they can rest and sleep.

Therefore

, polar bears are

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threatened

threatend

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threatened

with extinction. Another major reason is illegal hunting. Some individuals or criminal

organization

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killed numerous

animals

just for

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their

thier

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their

commercial purpose. In

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particular

paticular

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particular

, some

kind

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of elephants

are

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critically

endangerd

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endangered

. Focusing on solutions, reviewing our daily life and acting for

environment

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is effective.

For example

, people conserve

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resources

resourses

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resources

,

such

as water, oil and electricity for the

next

generations to revel in these natural gifts.

Similarly

, we shouldn't do illegal dumping of waste at sea. Another effective solution is to enact strict laws or

tolevy

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levy

a heavy penalty on people

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fail

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to abide by environmental laws. These

policy

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act as

effective

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remedy

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for crime prevention. In conclusion, human activity, from

iricit

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illicit

hunting to

wastibg

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wasting

resources is responsible for climate change and

dying

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out of some

kind

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of

animals

and plants.

Therefore

, not only the government but we have to take responsibility for

this

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problem

program

probrem

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problem

and act for the environment.