More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Cities are seeing a growing number of immigrants who intend to pursue a better quality of life from the rural area. It is true that some people may find it is not easy to integrate into a
city
. There are several factors Use synonyms
affect
their lives and the government certainly can take steps to tackle Correct pronoun usage
that affect
this
problem.
There are some giant gaps between Linking Words
urban
and rural Add an article
the urban
area
in terms of finance, culture and environment. Fix the agreement mistake
areas
Firstly
, the living standard in Linking Words
Use synonyms
city
is better than Add an article
the city
countryside
but the cost of Correct article usage
the countryside
that is
the high household ownership and cost of living. Linking Words
Secondly
, some citizens are greedy but talented so they may pose a threat to innocent people’s Linking Words
asset
, and the network of relationships in Fix the agreement mistake
assets
Use synonyms
city
is not as strong as that in Add an article
the city
village
so Add an article
the village
a village
migration
may feel disappointed about that. Replace the word
migrants
Finally
, cities are normally facing some serious Linking Words
environment
problems due to the Replace the word
environmental
industry
revolution and Replace the word
industrial
city
development. Use synonyms
For example
, the air condition is poor and noise pollution is Linking Words
norm
if you live beside Add an article
the norm
the
highway or business area.
To solve the problems above, the governments should show Correct article usage
a
the
money power and proper policy. The tuition fee should be exempted for Correct article usage
apply
low income
Add a hyphen
low-income
group
and reduce the price of public services Fix the agreement mistake
groups
such
as metro tickets. Linking Words
Furthermore
, The multi-culture can thrive the society so the governments should organize some special events or build theme gardens for Linking Words
inhabit
. As to environmental protection, governments should pour more money Change the verb form
inhabiting
in
planting trees and introduce new laws to limit industry factories Change preposition
into
to
produce pollution.
In conclusion, finance, culture and environment are the main factors causing the difficulty of migrating to cities while the government could mitigate these problems and benefit Fix the infinitive
apply
for
all citizens by using money and policy.Change preposition
apply
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