Some people think that the government should spend more money on public services rather than wasting money on the arts. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Some
people
think that we should spend more money on facilities instead
of teachers
. In contrast
, other people
say spend
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spending
teachers
is better. This
issue has been discussed frequently in modern
generation. From my point of view, these two Add an article
the modern
cost
are both important for education. Change the determiner
costs
However
, if I can only afford one of these. I would choose to spend on teachers
. Besides
, some reasons and details will be explained in the following paragraphs.
On one hand, some people
think we should pay more on
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for
teachers
than the computers
. In other words
, they think the
teaching effectiveness is more necessary than Correct article usage
apply
high quality
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high-quality
computers
. From their perspective, the learning result of students is depends
on the teaching method by Change the verb form
depends
teachers
. For instance
, there are
something hard in Change the verb form
is
the
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apply
mathematic
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teachers
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invent
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drawings
song
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songs
makes
students Wrong verb form
make
to
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apply
it
. Correct pronoun usage
them
Moreover
, allocate
more funding to hire remarkable Wrong verb form
allocating
teachers
will increase the character of education.
On the other hand
, partially of people
think that we should mainly spent
on Change the verb form
spend
computers
. From my point of view, the
technology is Correct article usage
apply
progress
a lot in recent years. Add an article
the progress
In addition
, using ecteronic devices in educations
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education
have
some advantages. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
For example
, it makes our learning process more smoothly and convenient
. Correct quantifier usage
more convenient
Besides
, global
warming situation is worse gradually now. Correct article usage
the global
In addition
, students can use the
electronic books Correct article usage
apply
by
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via
computers
through the internet or software. As a result
, it can reduce lots of papers
consumption to improve the global warming situation.
In conclusion, the electronic facilities and teaching quality are Change the noun form
paper
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botts
bott
critical for education, it is Correct your spelling
both
concern
about the learning character of Wrong verb form
concerned
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the student
a student
student
. From my point of view, a school which has lots of good Fix the agreement mistake
students
computers
but there is Correct your spelling
no
not
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no
teacher
can teach, these Add an article
a teacher
computers
are wasting. In contrast
, there are some outstanding teachers
in the school, spend more money on Add an article
the computer
a computer
computer
can support the teaching and learning. Fix the agreement mistake
computers
Finally
, If I can only choose one to pay more, I think I will spend more on hiring the
teacher who is brilliant.Correct article usage
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