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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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People
 have
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different
diffirent
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different
 views on the importance of studying
food
science
 and cooking at
education
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 institutions. While some
people
 think that
students
 should focus on key
subjects
 which may help them in the future, I still believe that
about
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food
science
still
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 important for them. On the one hand,
main
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the main
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subjects
 which
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being
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 taught at our school,
such
 as maths or literature might provide us
some
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 sort of skills in the future.
For example
, logical thinking and critical thinking when learning maths and literature
are prepare
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 for us to deal with problem-solving. It
also
 shows that
people
 with
high
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 amount of skills
are tend
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 to be hired
than
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more than
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 those unskilled
people
.
Therefore
, it might be important for us to spend attention
to
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 the important
subjects
 at school because our career might rely
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it
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them
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.
On the other hand
, having a solid amount of knowledge about
food
 and cooking can ensure
us
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a healthy lifestyle and
also
 provides us
survival
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 skills.
Students
 often lack knowledge about the nutrition of
food
 which may lead to unhealthy eating habits, a reason
of
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 causing obesity
at
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 children.
This
 is why learning about
food
science
 is important.
Secondly
,
students
 with
those skill
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 could live independently on their own easy way.
This
 will prevent them from both readily foods and foods at convenience stores. In conclusion,
although
 some schools reach their
students
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 on academic
subjects
, I believe that learning about
food
science
 is still important for each
children
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child
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 in order to develop
their
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a
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 healthy lifestyle.
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