some people believe that "Employers should not be concerned about the way their employees dress, but the quality of their work". To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is widely accepted that the confrontation between employers caring about the way their
employees
dress and the quality of their
work
has been emerging as a heated topic among publicity. While some people claim that
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and synchronicity of their
company
should be taken, I am of the opinion that
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quality of their
work
has become increasingly dominant due to the benefits it offers. It is believed by a great number of people that
employees
should wear the
company
's uniform for several reasons.
Firstly
, in order to
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discipline and synchronicity, most
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workers
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have to wear the same outfit for working days,
for example
in a big traditional
company
, leaders offer their
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to always remember that they are a part of the brand and each of them in other subsidiary
company
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to wear the similar.
Secondly
, seniors reckon that out-look
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should
not be concerned in labouring hours. What could happen if their
employees
just care about daily outfits without focussing on
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?
However
, I believe that the advantages of the quality of their
work
significantly surpass those of
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synchronicity. The
first
thing that attracts people is because of each person's unique style.
Employees
can wear which suits them and makes them confident to get ready for
work
.
Moreover
, keeping wearing a fixed suit
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eight hours does not give them
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comfort while completing missions.
That is
the main reason why there are more and more young companies
allow
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their servant to wear formal things nowadays.
Also
, they will have more time
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about themselves, which contributes
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the overall and objective view of the
company
. In conclusion, if the
employees
are satisfied with their outfit for working, they can boost
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productivity and corporate value
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best way. At that time, the
company
is
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also
aslo
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also
"dressed well" and even employers or any class have to
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to
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them.
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