A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say wether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Sarah,

Firstly

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I’d like to say that extremely happy that you decide to join

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camping program

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summer and hope you could make the most out of it to recharge your batteries to enable you to keep working hard once you get back. As I’ve heard there will be too more entertaining programs included in the tour schedule which will make

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holiday more adventure than ever, the tour program contains a daily show of different amateur bands which is basically dancing and singing every night.

furthermore

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, a green tour is added to the program in which there would be long walking and exploring the mountain and virginal nature where there is a long river and waterfall in there that enable us to swim in there.

Last

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summer only playing different games and sports, swimming in the outdoor pool, a white party and drink were organized. It seems we will have so much more fun

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year. Remember to bring proper shoes and clothes to stay over and suitable for mountain climbing since I remember you had some problem with your foot , you may find it a bit harmful and challenging,

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, if you still go to bed early you may find the night shows somehow annoying. Oh, I forgot to tell you that I wish to join camping most probably if I could manage my jobs till

then

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. Looking forward to meeting you soon. all the best, Fateme

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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8 paragraphs

242 words

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