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In some countries, children have short school day of 5 hours. In other countries, the school duration is often longer. Does it have more benefits than drawbacks?

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The educational system differs in various countries basically with the
time
 factor. People say that some regions in the world have
a
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less
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hours
 studying in
school
 whilst others have lengthy
hours
.
This
 essay will discuss the positive and negative and,
then
 opinions will be drawn. Learning is pivotal but the duration of
study
 should be taken into consideration. Naturally,
children
's brains are quick in assimilating ideas and information but ,
then
 they have
a different levels
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different levels
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 of IQ . Longer
time
 in the
study
 makes one
to
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feel exhausted , and have lesser
time
 to
study
 while at home or carry out their assignments. A researcher once opts out that having a nap after
school
 activities makes the brain of a child more active in articulating. Moreso, different countries have their curriculum of
study
. For ,example a child who stays in
school
 learning for more than 6
hours
 will not be active in carrying out his /her assignment and
study
 ahead of the teacher,
hence
 more
time
 doesn't mean more learning.
Furthermore
, long
hours
 spent in
school
 will discourage most
children
 from studying in
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different divisions,
for example
 ,
children
 are encouraged to practice other skills
such
 as football, and other healthy games that can keep their brains active.
On the other hand
, longer
time
 studying will give the teachers more
time
 to spend with students, to focus on trouble areas and more difficult materials. In conclusion, regardless of various benefits on both sides, I believe that minimum duration in studying is of higher benefits
,
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 because lengthy
hours
decreases
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children
's ability to concentrate and may not be able to learn anything,after a certain point.
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