You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show stages in the development of simple cooking equipment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show stages in the development of simple cooking equipment.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the stages in the process of cooking development. It is noticeable that there are three distinct stages in the development of equipment, from the initial container made of stone to the eventual cooking product with multiple functions.
At the first stage
in the development, the primary material of the original bottle is
from
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stone, which
is aim
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to preserve the food.
Next
, the shape of
cook
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container is flat and made of
the
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clay shield. The final stage presents the latest cooking equipment with many
use
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,
such
as the metal bottom and a door for the clear flow of ashes and air.
By contrast
, it is
also
clear that the functions of cooking remain on the top, and there are some tools for supporting
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the pot and the steel net for grating
for
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charcoal.
Overall
, we can witness the changes
of
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cooking equipment between three main stages.
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