There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to the company arrive. The manager has asked for suggestions on how the reception area could be improved Please write a letter to our manager. In the letter • Describe the complaints • Say why the reception area is important • Suggest how the reception area could be improved

Dear Sir/Maam, Few complaints have been thrown in your
company
, regarding on the state of the
reception
area
and you want suggestions of how can it be improved. I'm writing
this
letter to provide an opinion regarding the matter.
First
of all, the complaints are all about the appearance of the
reception
area
and
it's
Replace the word
its
show examples
cleanliness. The floor is not clean, you can even see footprints here and there. The sofa in the waiting
area
is
also
dusty and not arranged properly. The aircon, sometimes not functioning and you resort to the electric fan which, I might add, is not really helpful in certain events when the weather is too hot. Taking care of the
reception
area
is important for a
company
, it is the
first
line of defence of how the
company
will get treated by their clients. If the clients observe that the place is comfortable and relaxing they will be impressed and will
also
think that the
company
is of high quality. The
first
impression
last
and making a good impression on the clients is necessary in order for the
company
to grow. I suggest that you should assign some of the staff in charge of cleaning in the
reception
area
. Have them check from time to time if the surroundings are clean and in order. If there are times, the main aircon will not function, make sure there's a replacement in place. Most of all, always greet and smile when talking to a customer, for it will give them a good impression that the staff are nice and friendly, and they will come back for more. I hope
this
feedback will be of help to you, Yours truly, Angel
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The Closing

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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