There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to the company arrive. The manager has asked for suggestions on how the reception area could be improved Please write a letter to our manager. In the letter • Describe the complaints • Say why the reception area is important • Suggest how the reception area could be improved
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing to express my opinion about the reception area in response to your request on how it could be improved.
In fact, I visited your company
last
week and the negative point that caught my attention was the reception area. Indeed, it is small and does not have proper decoration. In addition
, the colour of the walls is dark.
I strongly believe that the entrance is one of the most important areas in the company because the first
thing that is
seen is this
place. Therefore
, if you create an eye-catching space at your entrance, you can absorb more customers.
There are a number of things which you can do to improve this
area. Firstly
, you consider a bigger space for this
. I saw a room behind the entrance, thus
you should integrate these two rooms. Secondly
, the decoration of the room should be changed. For instance
, you can use bright colours on walls, and some models of your product can be located in this
place.
I remain at your disposal for any further
information.
Yours sincerely,
Mohammad Hossein ranjbariSubmitted by ranjbari4526 on
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