Nowadays, young people communicate with friends and family through mostly social network sites, rather than other ways of communication like talking on the phone or face to face. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give some reason for your answer.

Recently, many youngsters prefer to converse with colleagues and

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through the

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, to other means by calling or physically.

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a rationale

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for the answer.

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is a means of reaching out to

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information and

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information. Recently,

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of the youth prefer to talk to

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it is the fastest means of

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any other means.

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a survey carried out by a British researcher said the fastest means of

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is through the

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.

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means is easier and with

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it more fervently.

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by the youth and

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brought about more advancement in

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technology and

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are able to meet their

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and folks that they can't meet physically. My cousin and her friend barely see since they were done with

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but the

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brings them together through the means of chatting

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it brings

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that are in

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together

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, the trend of conversing through the

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can not

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firm where

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is been used as a means of

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to pass information via Gmail for the growth of the organization.

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, the majority of famous firm tends to pass

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advertisement through the

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and interview are being done through the

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network.

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, I read about an advertisement in a newspaper where the interview was done through

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social

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.

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process brought

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in the remote work whereby

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work on

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wherever they are

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phenomenon brought comfort to

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. In conclusion, through the easy accessibility of the social

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network, life

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brought comfortability to

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and it is a positive trend, with the pace it brings to life.