Nowadays, young people communicate with friends and family through mostly social network sites, rather than other ways of communication like talking on the phone or face to face. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give some reason for your answer.

Recently, many youngsters prefer to converse with colleagues and
relative
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through the
use
of
internet
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the internet
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, to other means by calling or physically.
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a rationale
the rationale
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for the answer.
To begin
,
communication
is a means of reaching out to
people
,
to receive
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information and
pass
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information. Recently,
majority
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of the youth prefer to talk to
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an individual
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individual
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by the
use
of
internet
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the internet
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because
of
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it is the fastest means of
communication
, and
this
makes
majority
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the majority
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of
people
to
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use
it
to
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any other means.
For
instance
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a survey carried out by a British researcher said the fastest means of
communication
is through the
internet
.
Moreover
,
this
means is easier and with
this
people
ought to
use
it more fervently.
Additionally
,
this
approach
is widely
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use
by the youth and
this
brought about more advancement in
the
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technology and
people
are able to meet their
colleague
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colleagues
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and folks that they can't meet physically. My cousin and her friend barely see since they were done with
there
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their
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study
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but the
internet
brings them together through the means of chatting
doing
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and doing
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video
call
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calls
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and
thus
it brings
people
that are in
long distance
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friendship
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friendships
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together
Furthermore
, the trend of conversing through the
internet
can not
be overemphasize
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in a
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larger
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lager
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firm where
internet
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the internet
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is been used as a means of
communication
, and the workers
tends
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to pass information via Gmail for the growth of the organization.
Also
, the majority of famous firm tends to pass
there
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advertisement through the
internet
and interview are being done through the
media
network.
For example
, I read about an advertisement in a newspaper where the interview was done through
the
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social
media
.
This
process brought
increase
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an increase
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in the remote work whereby
people
can
worton
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work on
the
media
wherever they are
thus
this
phenomenon brought comfort to
people
. In conclusion, through the easy accessibility of the social
media
network, life
as
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has
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brought comfortability to
people
and it is a positive trend, with the pace it brings to life.
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