In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is hard to deny that

vehicles

without

drivers

will make many

people

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unemployed, and

such

a fact leads impressionable

people

to generate the opinion that

driverless

vehicles

have more disadvantages.

However

such

a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies. As far as safety, economy, and job position are considered, I strongly disagree with

such

opinion

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First

and foremost, I believe

driverless

vehicles

have more advantages because they are safer transportation. To be specific,

less

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fewer

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people

die from

driverless

vehicles

Vehicles

with

drivers

lead

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ocean of traffic accidents every year, but the statistics show us that only a few traffic accidents happened because of

driverless

vehicles

. Passengers can have confidence in the safety of

driverless

vehicles

Furthermore

, the fact that there is no need for millions of

people

to learn

driving

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indicates that

driverless

vehicles

can save money. Take the case of my friend Joey, who has taken the driving test

for

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three times because

several

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of several

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mistakes.

As a result

, he paid more than 8000 yuan for his driving license. If

the

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driverless

vehicles

are in use widely, Joey will never waste so much money on learning

driving

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Nevertheless

, a voice arises that

driverless

vehicles

will make many

people

such

drivers

lose their jobs. Ironically, more positions will be generated

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the fast development of

driverless

vehicles

and those jobs offer more than

drivers

For instance

, there must be a lot of

vacancy

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the

driverless

vehicles

engineer position and with the knowledge about

vehicles

drivers

are able to be engineers quickly.

Therefore

, we

donnot

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don't

do not

worry about

the

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unemployment. In conclusion, in terms of safety, economy, and job position, the advantages of

driverless

vehicles

outweigh the disadvantages. While there are one thousand Hamlet in one thousand

people

’s eyes, I am confident that my opponents will compromise after being shown

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my article.

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4Word repetition
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

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