In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#future #nobody #wiil #newspapers #books

Some

people

believes

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that no one would purchase printed

books

newspaper

in the future since

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online resources are free and more variable. Personally, I agree with

this

to some extent.

However

, I think that paper-based

materials

would still be essential

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some occasions. What’s more, some online articles charge fees for

people

to read as well. On the one hand, the vast majority of

people

consider online documents to be more convenient and easier to carry around.

Consequently

, ebooks or tablets became more

prevailing

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For instance

, most college students in Taiwan use iPad to take notes and

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apply

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read

the

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textbooks. Digital

materials

are usually free while sometimes the original

books

are unaffordable for students.

Additionally

, online information can be updated really quickly. If

people

want to keep up with the latest news, waiting for the

newspaper

headlines of the other day would be definitely not fast enough. From my perspective, printed

books

and

newspaper

will gradually

dies

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out in

this

regard.

On the other hand

although

digital passages are more accessible for some

people

, there are still some reasons why printed

materials

are still needed.

Firstly

, elderly

people

tend to rely on actual

books

and

newspaper

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newspapers

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more.

Reason

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being is that they are not familiar with advanced technologies,

they

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and they

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might not know how to read the online sources.

Secondly

, fake news and false information are very common owing to the accessibility of

Internet

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the Internet

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People

would believe in misinformation online without knowing if it comes from

horse’s

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mouth. As opposed to actual

books

, often revised and examined by

people

before publishing, are more reliable. In conclusion, I agree that the advent of

Internet

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has changed the ways

people

live their lives. More and more

people

opting

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for reading things online.

However

, there are still some drawbacks

about

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online resources.

Also

, many articles online still charge,

such

as journal articles written by experts.

People

would still need to pay for some specific

materials

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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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