You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter -say what the participants liked about the hotel -explain why they were unhappy about the food -Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

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Dear Hotel Manager, I am writing

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letter to express my sincere thanks on behalf of my team as we were impressed with provided hotel furniture facilities despite the mind-blowing internal designs and mesmerizing white floor throughout the building.

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, they are not happy with the lunch including vegan

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too.

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, a few of them went out to have their lunch as they do not want to eat

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disgusting eateries with half-boiled rice , tasteless

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, sweets and no proper hygiene at the food place. Undoubtedly, I strongly believe that there should be an opportunity to improve your food quality and make your customers feel happy by providing fresh and tasty

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on the table. If possible collect their feedback right after their lunch and it would help you to identify what went wrong despite the all efforts made from your end.

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but not least try to change the chef if

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is not going to improve going forward. I look forward to seeing improvements with great food

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. Thanks, Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Wed Aug 10 2022

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

174 words

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