Nowadays, obesity
become
much more Verb problem
has become
among
people. In my opinion, I think Correct word choice
common among
Verb problem
being overweighting
overweighting
is Replace the word
overweight
due to
the lack of activities and eating Linking Words
high calories
meals, Use the right word
high-calorie
although
it can be managed and reduced by extra exercise and a Linking Words
better
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better,
healthy
diet.
Replace the word
healthier
Firstly
, the main reason for Linking Words
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is that people don't do many activities. To illustrate, today's technology leads to less physical movement. Punctuation problem
apply
In other words
, most things can be done Linking Words
while
you are Linking Words
setting
in your chair at home. A simple example, if I wanted to have information about Math, I don't have to go and search for it in the library, I can easily get it from my room by googling it.Another reason is eating an unhealthy meal which contains high calories and sugar, Use the right word
sitting
such
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Burger
, Pizza, PepsiCorrect article usage
a Burger
....
etc. Punctuation problem
,
However
, most people today depend on fast food, because they are busy all the time working Linking Words
and
it is easier to get the food ready rather than make it at home.
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, and
On the other hand
, being overweight can be decreased , beginning withLinking Words
,
adding more sports to our daily life. Punctuation problem
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example, using bicycles when going to work or school, walking to the supermarkets Fix capitalization
For
in state
of using cars, and even when you are doing some work on computersUse the right word
instead
a
little exercise can be done. A second thing that would be usefulPunctuation problem
, a
,
is a healthy diet. Punctuation problem
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cutting
some minutes from our day to cook at homeFix capitalization
Cutting
,
would change our health. namely, eggs and salad are clear examples of healthy food and won't take time Punctuation problem
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for preparing
.
In conclusion, obesity is a fact we are facing Change preposition
to prepare
present-day
, and its rate Use the right word
present day
increasing
more and more Verb problem
is increasing
due to
a lot of reasons like lack of physical exercise and a bad diet. Linking Words
but
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But
,
it can be reducedPunctuation problem
apply
,
sports and eating healthy would be a great solution.Punctuation problem
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