The graphs below show the average daily hours of sunshine and the average monthly temperature in Darwin and Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs demonstrate the average daily

hours

of

sunshine

and the average monthly

temperature

in

Darwin

and

Melbourne

.

Overall

, we can see that

Darwin

sees a decreasing trend

while

Melbourne

witnesses an increasing trend in the

number

of average daily

hours

of

sunshine

.

In addition

,

although

the figure for average monthly

temperature

in

Darwin

is higher than

Melbourne

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, both cities show the same trend in almost time. Regarding the

number

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sunshine

, after having 10

sunshine

hours

on average in the first month,

Darwin

experiences a plunge in the

number

for

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sunshine

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between February and June.

However

, in the

last

six months, it records an upward fluctuation of 6. In contrast,

Melbourne

has a lower

number

of

sunshine

hours

on average than

Darwin

, with 6 in January.

Nevertheless

, the

number

of

sunshine

hours

in

this

city goes up by 2 and surpasses the

number

in

Darwin

from February to October.

Finally

, it declines by 4 at the beginning point in December. Regarding the

number

for

temperature

, the

number

for average monthly

temperature

in

Darwin

and

Melbourne

fluctuate

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from 25 to 35 and from 10 to 30, respectively, in 11 months. But the

number

for

Melbourne

goes down by 5,

meanwhile

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the data for

Darwin

is still stable in the

last

month.