The graphs below show the average daily hours of sunshine and the average monthly temperature in Darwin and Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs demonstrate the average daily

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of

sunshine

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and the average monthly

temperature

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in

Darwin

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and

Melbourne

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.

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, we can see that

Darwin

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sees a decreasing trend

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Melbourne

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witnesses an increasing trend in the

number

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of average daily

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of

sunshine

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.

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,

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the figure for average monthly

temperature

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in

Darwin

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is higher than

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Melbourne

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, both cities show the same trend in almost time. Regarding the

number

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for

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of

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sunshine

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, after having 10

sunshine

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hours

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on average in the first month,

Darwin

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experiences a plunge in the

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for

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sunshine

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the sunshine

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between February and June.

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, in the

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six months, it records an upward fluctuation of 6. In contrast,

Melbourne

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has a lower

number

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of

sunshine

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hours

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on average than

Darwin

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, with 6 in January.

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, the

number

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of

sunshine

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hours

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in

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city goes up by 2 and surpasses the

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in

Darwin

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from February to October.

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, it declines by 4 at the beginning point in December. Regarding the

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for

temperature

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, the

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for average monthly

temperature

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in

Darwin

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and

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fluctuate

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from 25 to 35 and from 10 to 30, respectively, in 11 months. But the

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for

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goes down by 5,

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the data for

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is still stable in the

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month.