You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorect. write a letter to the editor of the magazin.In your letter correct the information in the article explan why it is important for the magazin to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
This
letter is to express your mistake in the article you published in the Geographic travel magazine on the 20 th of June that you gave false information about my town.
First
of all,would like to inform you,my town is four seasons,and not only my city is amazing in the winter for tourists,but also
they can travel in other seasons.Therefore
,please correct the error that you wrote:"Karaj is a wonderful town in the winter".
On the other hand
,As far as I know,your magazine is an international journal,and very popular in my country,so I expect you to publish correct information in the information age.
As the mistake was caused by your magazine,I hope this
problem will be fixed as soon as possible,Thus
,I suggest you if it would be possible apologize to my fellow citizens in the next
edition you publish.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
Mohammad Mohammadi teSubmitted by maralkarimi48 on
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