You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorect. write a letter to the editor of the magazin.In your letter correct the information in the article explan why it is important for the magazin to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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This

letter is to express your mistake in the article you published in the Geographic travel magazine on the 20 th of June that you gave false information about my town.

First

of all,would like to inform you,my town is four seasons,and not only my city is amazing in the winter for tourists,but

also

they can travel in other seasons.

Therefore

,please correct the error that you wrote:"Karaj is a wonderful town in the winter".

On the other hand

,As far as I know,your magazine is an international journal,and very popular in my country,so I expect you to publish correct information in the information age. As the mistake was caused by your magazine,I hope

this

problem will be fixed as soon as possible,

Thus

,I suggest you if it would be possible apologize to my fellow citizens in the

edition you publish. I look forward to receiving your response. Yours faithfully, Mohammad Mohammadi te

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7 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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incorrect information
misleading
rectify
significance
credibility
fact-based
accurate depiction
reliable sources
misinformation
influence public perception
tourist attraction
reputation
publish a correction
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