Some say thatr advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is believed that people are successfully captivated and persuaded to own the
products
thanks to the advertisements
' effects, while others suppose that the monotonousness of advertisements
do
not gather significant Change the verb form
does
attention
from the audiences.
Advertisements
can be seen as creative 'traps' of the companies' producers which aim to appeal to the consumers. By using this
announcing technique, the companies' products
could be well-known and acknowledged by the national as well as international
public. A successful Add an article
the international
advertisement
has to provide useful informations
about the Change the wording
information
pieces of information
products
for the identified target of customers, create attention
by using multi-colored
effects, and follow or mimic the popular trends these days as well. Change the spelling
multi-coloured
By contrast
, there are
Change the verb form
is
also
the existence of some products
which do not gain the attention
of the customers. Because the content of their advertisements
do
not provide enough or trustworthy information, or they did not apply the Correct subject-verb agreement
does
colorful
effects usefully, and especially, their Change the spelling
colourful
products
are not appropriate for the vast majority of the public. To illustrate, Milo is a famous international brand of milk for every age especially
children, and annually, its company gains a vast majority of profit by using the Add the comma(s)
,especially
advertisement
containing the
visual images of Correct article usage
apply
children
leisure activities, demonstrating that using milo provides energy for playing sport and other activities, and it is acknowledged by children all over the world.
In my opinion, the techniques that every producer must use in order to advertise successfully do not only involve the aforementioned ideaChange noun form
children's
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
the platform is the prior factor that must be paid attention
.
Change preposition
to.
For instance
, TV, Facebook, Instagram, etc are some platforms that have a high rate of use, hence
several users would notice the advertisements
rather than announcing the products
on less well-known platforms. Additionally
, Youtube is a special case when advertisements
could appear in the middle of the watching video, and that could provide for
the users an annoyed and Change preposition
apply
frustrated
experienceReplace the word
frustrating
as well as they
will ignore those announcements. Add the comma(s)
, as well as they,
That is
a serious failure for Youtube and the advertisement
producers.
To conclude, a successful advertisement
has to significantly deal with many compulsory conditions so as to be welcomed by the public. And the root cause lies in the producers' creation and flexibility.Submitted by luudang97 on
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