Some say thatr advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that people are successfully captivated and persuaded to own the

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thanks to the

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' effects, while others suppose that the monotonousness of

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not gather significant

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from the audiences.

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can be seen as creative 'traps' of the companies' producers which aim to appeal to the consumers. By using

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announcing technique, the companies'

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could be well-known and acknowledged by the national as well as

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public. A successful

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has to provide useful

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about the

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for the identified target of customers, create

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by using

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effects, and follow or mimic the popular trends these days as well.

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the existence of some

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which do not gain the

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of the customers. Because the content of their

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not provide enough or trustworthy information, or they did not apply the

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effects usefully, and especially, their

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are not appropriate for the vast majority of the public. To illustrate, Milo is a famous international brand of milk for every age

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children, and annually, its company gains a vast majority of profit by using the

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containing

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visual images of

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leisure activities, demonstrating that using milo provides energy for playing sport and other activities, and it is acknowledged by children all over the world. In my opinion, the techniques that every producer must use in order to advertise successfully do not only involve the aforementioned idea

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but

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the platform is the prior factor that must be paid

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, TV, Facebook, Instagram, etc are some platforms that have a high rate of use,

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several users would notice the

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rather than announcing the

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on less well-known platforms.

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, Youtube is a special case when

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could appear in the middle of the watching video, and that could provide

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the users an annoyed and

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experience

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will ignore those announcements.

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a serious failure for Youtube and the

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producers. To conclude, a successful

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has to significantly deal with many compulsory conditions so as to be welcomed by the public. And the root cause lies in the producers' creation and flexibility.