Some say thatr advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that people are successfully captivated and persuaded to own the
products
thanks to the
advertisements
' effects, while others suppose that the monotonousness of
advertisements
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not gather significant
attention
from the audiences.
Advertisements
can be seen as creative 'traps' of the companies' producers which aim to appeal to the consumers. By using
this
announcing technique, the companies'
products
could be well-known and acknowledged by the national as well as
international
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public. A successful
advertisement
has to provide useful
informations
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information
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about the
products
for the identified target of customers, create
attention
by using
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effects, and follow or mimic the popular trends these days as well.
By contrast
, there
are
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also
the existence of some
products
which do not gain the
attention
of the customers. Because the content of their
advertisements
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not provide enough or trustworthy information, or they did not apply the
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effects usefully, and especially, their
products
are not appropriate for the vast majority of the public. To illustrate, Milo is a famous international brand of milk for every age
especially
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children, and annually, its company gains a vast majority of profit by using the
advertisement
containing
the
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visual images of
children
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leisure activities, demonstrating that using milo provides energy for playing sport and other activities, and it is acknowledged by children all over the world. In my opinion, the techniques that every producer must use in order to advertise successfully do not only involve the aforementioned idea
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but
also
the platform is the prior factor that must be paid
attention
.
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For instance
, TV, Facebook, Instagram, etc are some platforms that have a high rate of use,
hence
several users would notice the
advertisements
rather than announcing the
products
on less well-known platforms.
Additionally
, Youtube is a special case when
advertisements
could appear in the middle of the watching video, and that could provide
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the users an annoyed and
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experience
as well as they
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will ignore those announcements.
That is
a serious failure for Youtube and the
advertisement
producers. To conclude, a successful
advertisement
has to significantly deal with many compulsory conditions so as to be welcomed by the public. And the root cause lies in the producers' creation and flexibility.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • capture attention
  • emotional engagement
  • targeting techniques
  • tailor ads
  • preferences
  • celebrity endorsements
  • influencer marketing
  • psychological tactics
  • scarcity
  • urgency
  • ad fatigue
  • effectiveness
  • coping mechanisms
  • ad blockers
  • saturated markets
  • innovative strategies
  • traditional methods
  • digital media
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