Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper book will never disappear. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Globalization of
internet
through the continents is allowing Correct article usage
the internet
majority
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the majority
having
access to lots of information including Change the verb form
to have
e-
books
. There is an idea being claimed by a number of people that paper
books
are about to get lost due to the
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apply
e-
books
, while others believe that Add a hyphen
paper-based
paper based
Add a hyphen
paper-based
books
will never vanish. In my opinion, due to the availability of different types along with time saving
of the reader, electronic Add a hyphen
time-saving
books
will continue to increase in need, meanwhile
Add a comma
,meanwhile
paper
books
also
have their importance and they will keep being a part of reader’s life.
To begin
with, development
of Correct article usage
the development
internet
has positively affected the way people read. Add an article
the internet
In other words
, for last
couple Correct article usage
the last
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of years
years
numerous electronic versions of new and historical Add a comma
,years
books
are uploaded to the internet from where a person can get his lovely book not regarding to
his location. Remove the preposition
apply
For example
, recent
survey conducted by Oxford University asked 100 students to find historical Add an article
a recent
books
(which some of them do not exist in paper
version
) around the Bristol libraries, surprisingly 98% of students found Fix the agreement mistake
versions
books
though
in e-version. Correct word choice
apply
In addition
, the trend of electronic books
led to saving vast time especially
in student life. Add the comma(s)
,especially
That is
to say, when there are examinations or assignments upcoming, students may find e-
books
more handy
rather than going to the libraries since it saves their precious time.
Replace the words
handier
On the other hand
, handbooks had been a part of humanity and will continue its
Correct pronoun usage
their
importance
. With the help of Replace the word
important
Add a hyphen
paper-based
paper based
Add a hyphen
paper-based
books
our ancestors left essential education Add a comma
,books
through
hundreds of years. Change preposition
for
Moreover
, a physical book is less stressful comparing
to Wrong verb form
compared
e-
books
(majority ads
may appear while reading) that Change preposition
of ads
attracts
many to prefer Correct subject-verb agreement
attract
Add a hyphen
paper-based
paper based
ones.
Add a hyphen
paper-based
By way
of conclusion, though handbooks have importance and good feelings during Change preposition
Way
reading
which can not be replaced by Add an article
the reading
e-
books
, electronic types will be in much demand in close future for their benefits mentioned above.Submitted by abdulbosit1995 on
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