Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

I am of the opinion that

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technology

is a big plus to

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development. It is undoubtedly true that

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technology

has benefited us in a plethora of ways. The best example to illustrate

this

is the invention of the

internet

. The

internet

has successfully made our way of living to become more efficient and more effective. The reasons are as follows;

first

, we are able to hire people from different countries with a low-cost salary,

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, the

internet

is everywhere and eternal.

To begin

with, back in the day, many entrepreneurs used to look for workers from the same region as theirs, or, at least from areas that can be

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reached by train or the other form of transportations, as these hired men should go to the office to get to work. Nowadays, these scheme has turned upside-down. The owners of many businesses are now able to hire people from so many different nations. The other countries like the developing ones have a significant currency difference,

hence

, they can be hired with relatively lower paychecks.

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of all, the

internet

is a gigantic and

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eternal archive. People ranging from doctors, engineers, teachers, and even students, can learn anything from the books, journals, or

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other media like pictures and videos stored by

this

magnificent

technology

of the

internet

. Not only can they access it from any gadgets, but these materials are

also

able to be accessed anytime, or, 24/7.

Moreover

, those students who still find it difficult to grasp the materials in class,

for example

, can still watch the materials online, as many times as they like because the

internet

has no limit to

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the information. All in all,

technology

like the

internet

is a very great invention as it has made our life easier and more convenient.

Therefore

, I couldn't agree more that

this

is a great development

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