Many people believe that family has greater influence in child life and development as compared to other factors such as friends, tv, music and so on? Do you agree or disagree with the content ?

It is often argued that family has an enormous impact on children's

life

and development, whilst others believe that other factors

such

as

friends

, tv, music etc. As far as I am concerned, I vehemently agree with the

first

notion and

this

essay will discuss both points of view based on my personal opinions that can be given below.

First

of all, one of the

first

reasons why family becomes a greater influence on their offspring is because kids are more likely surrounded by their families every day and spent most of their time with them.

This

would mean that the parents are often taught their offspring about discipline, morality, manner, and the difference between right and wrong in their

life

.

For example

, the survey that has done by the researcher showed that a child who is living with his family is more successful compared to other children who are not living with their families.

On the other hand

, other aspects

such

as

friends

, tv and music

also

affected young adult's

life

and development.

Friends

,

for instance

, children who go to school are having a lot of

friends

.

This

would mean that they are

also

prone to be affected by their

friends

because they always play around or study together with them.

On the contrary

, no matter the things that affected them to become successful, nothing can bit the things which they have learned from their families. To sum it up, other influence factors

besides

family indeed give an impact on an adolescent's

life

and development.

However

, I strongly believe that family has the primary contribution for kids in the future.