Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things.Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays,
people
reckon that adverts are far more effective to manipulate the
people
in society.
Although
another section of society believes that
people
are no longer interested in
such
things.In my ,opinion adverts always persuade
people
with their effects and revolutions. On one hand,
people
get easily persuaded by the vibrant and improved technological properties of
advertisements
because they are modified by a large number of software to bend the ideas and emotions of
people
to buy the
product
at any cost.
Hence
,
people
easily get into
these trap
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and try to get one
product
whilst end up getting a few products
instead
.
For example
, in my personal experience in social ,media there is
an
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apply
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innumerable clothing
boutiques
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which we can shop at any time.But on the cover ,
page
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they don't mention their brand name because they display their designs to get the attention of the buyer.
Moreover
,advert companies hold data about each person's search field to receive details about the products he or she prefers.Due to that,
people
don't know
such
tricks so they pay for that
product
thinking that he/she succeeded.
On the other hand
,for some ,
people
they
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have been used to
advertisements
because whenever they are working adverts are popping out from everywhere.So they tend to make a blind eye and not even make
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a
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glance at
such
things and they continue to do /her work.There is
this
kind of
people
who knows all the tricks and tips advertising agencies play and they just
neglect
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.To exemplify,if one is surfing through the net to find a laptop he will get notifications from each and every laptop dealer from a flock of sites.But he will continue his search neglecting those
advertisements
because he wants to get the best
product
. In conclusion,I think that it is easy to get interested in a
product
from
advertisements
because of the way they present it and the technology they used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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