Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things.Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays,
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reckon that adverts are far more effective to manipulate the
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in society.
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another section of society believes that
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are no longer interested in
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things.In my ,opinion adverts always persuade
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with their effects and revolutions. On one hand,
people
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get easily persuaded by the vibrant and improved technological properties of
advertisements
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because they are modified by a large number of software to bend the ideas and emotions of
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to buy the
product
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at any cost.
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,
people
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easily get into
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and try to get one
product
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whilst end up getting a few products
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.
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, in my personal experience in social ,media there is
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innumerable clothing
boutiques
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which we can shop at any time.But on the cover ,
page
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they don't mention their brand name because they display their designs to get the attention of the buyer.
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,advert companies hold data about each person's search field to receive details about the products he or she prefers.Due to that,
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don't know
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tricks so they pay for that
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thinking that he/she succeeded.
On the other hand
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,for some ,
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they
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have been used to
advertisements
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because whenever they are working adverts are popping out from everywhere.So they tend to make a blind eye and not even make
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glance at
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things and they continue to do /her work.There is
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kind of
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who knows all the tricks and tips advertising agencies play and they just
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.To exemplify,if one is surfing through the net to find a laptop he will get notifications from each and every laptop dealer from a flock of sites.But he will continue his search neglecting those
advertisements
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because he wants to get the best
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. In conclusion,I think that it is easy to get interested in a
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from
advertisements
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because of the way they present it and the technology they used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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