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It is more effective if doctors do rounds (see patients in the hospital) in pairs, not individually. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some today contend that it is more active if
doctors
 do rounds (examination patients in the hospital) in
dyad
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, not alone. In my opinion,
although
 pairing is not mandatory, it should help
doctors
 to be more effective in assessing the
patient
's condition.
Firstly
, when two
doctors
also
 go to examine
in
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the
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one
patient
, the
patient
's psychology will be more secure because they will be examined by each doctor, avoiding injuries. They will
then
 be more open and share more about their
disease
 with their
doctors
.
Secondly
, when two
doctors
 go together, when they ask about a
disease
, they can help each other to supplement information from the
patient
,
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 each other while examining the
disease
. They can
then
 discuss the condition and progression of the
disease
, thereby agreeing on the best treatment for the
patient
. In conclusion,
doctors
 should make rounds (see patients in the hospital) with another doctor and
and
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through
that
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 it will bring more advantages for work, patients
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