It is more effective if doctors do rounds (see patients in the hospital) in pairs, not individually. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, some people said that it is more effective if
doctors
do rounds in pairs, not individually. They think that method will improve the
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accuracy
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accuracy
of the diagnosis and increase the efficacy of the treatment. Maybe some
patients
with more diseases need more
one
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doctor
to treat
efficiently
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them efficiently
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. In fact, there
are
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some
patient
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patients
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with
the
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rare
disease
and many disorders.
Therefore
only
one
doctor
can encounter numerous difficulties while caring
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patient
and solving his/her problems.
However
, in my opinion, it creates more problems than solves.
Firstly
, it causes the waste of human resources, especially
doctors
.
Instead
of doing rounds in pairs,
one
doctor
sees
patients
in the inpatient department and
another
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works in
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an outpatient
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clinic.
Subsequently
, we will help more
patients
and earn more money.
On the other hand
, in terms of medicine, each specialist is a
skillful
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doctor
who can diagnose and treat the
patient
independently.
Moreover
, the
doctors
will invite
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,
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head of
department
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the department
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or suggest a consultation or a conference when necessary. We should see
patients
with more
one
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doctors
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if the
patient
have
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more types of diseases
such
as heart
disease
, lung
disease
, liver
disease
et cetera. And we only do that
one
or few times per week, not daily. In summary, doing rounds in pairs shouldn't be routine in a clinical setting because it is neither available nor necessary.
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