It is more effective if doctors do rounds (see patients in the hospital) in pairs, not individually. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today, some people said that it is more effective if
doctors
do rounds in pairs, not individually. They think that method will improve the Use synonyms
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accuracy
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of the diagnosis and increase the efficacy of the treatment. Maybe some Correct your spelling
accuracy
patients
with more diseases need more Use synonyms
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one
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than one
doctor
to treat Use synonyms
efficiently
. In fact, there Correct pronoun usage
them efficiently
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patient
with Fix the agreement mistake
patients
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disease
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doctor
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for the
patient
and solving his/her problems. Use synonyms
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, in my opinion, it creates more problems than solves. Linking Words
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, it causes the waste of human resources, especially Linking Words
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Instead
of doing rounds in pairs, Linking Words
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doctor
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patients
in the inpatient department and Use synonyms
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outpatient
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an outpatient
the outpatient
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, we will help more Linking Words
patients
and earn more money. Use synonyms
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, in terms of medicine, each specialist is a Linking Words
skillful
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skilful
doctor
who can diagnose and treat the Use synonyms
patient
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, the Linking Words
doctors
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other specialist
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other specialists
the
head of Correct word choice
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department
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the department
a department
patients
with more Use synonyms
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one
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than one
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doctors
if the Fix the agreement mistake
doctor
patient
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have
more types of diseases Change the verb form
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disease
, lung Use synonyms
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, liver Use synonyms
disease
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one
or few times per week, not daily. In summary, doing rounds in pairs shouldn't be routine in a clinical setting because it is neither available nor necessary.Use synonyms
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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