It is more important for doctors to have good communication skills than to have deep knowledge in their discipline/field/specialization. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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when doctors use
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skills
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effectively
efectively
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effectively
. In my opinion,
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think
communication
skills
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not more important than deep
knowledge
of specialization .
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the one hand, there are various advantages of good
communication
skill
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skills
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.
First
of all, the
doctor
easy to identify their
patient
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patients
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s'problem
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problem
problems
through
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communication
. Because
,
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the
patients
feel
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comfortable
comportable
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comfortable
to share
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their
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symptoms
symtoms
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symptoms
. The
childrent
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children
patients
need to be patted to reduce their anxiety and depression when they go to
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.
Secondly
, the
patients
can better understand their problems and
treatment
option. So that, the
patients
are more likely to adhere to
treatment
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and
amd
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and
follow advice from
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a doctor
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doctor
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doctors
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.
The old
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patients
who
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the
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memory loss need to be advised many times to remember the
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treatment
treament
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treatment
.
On the other hand
, doctors
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to
profound
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knowledge
to
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diagnosis
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and treat exactly the diseases. The main reason is that the diseases are very diverse and complex. It is difficult to diagnose, so that
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the
doctor
have
the
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wide
knowledge
.
For example
, flu disease has 20 types, which can lead to
wrong
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diagnosis. An additional reason is that the
doctor
will give
the
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suitable
treatment
. Each patient has their own
persective
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perspective
of the diseases
,
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so
that
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they need
the
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individual
treatment
.
For instance
, The dosage of antipyretics for
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children
childent
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children
and adults is different
which
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depends
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on their weight and
ages
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. In conclusion, good
communication
skill certainly has it 's
benefit
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. But
i
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think both
communication
skills and strong medical
knowledge
is
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are
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essential to becoming a good
doctor
.
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