It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
The neonates always know nothing when they were born. There is a long period for them to learn the
difference
between right
and wrong at an early age before they grow up. Many parents believe that punishment
is necessary to help children
learn the difference
between right
and wrong at an early age. However
, I didn't
quite agree with such
opinions as for young infants the punishment
cannot work as they didn't
know anything during that time.
For children
at the age of three to five years old when they started to explorer
the world around them. They couldn'Replace the word
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build up the idea of what is right
and what is wrong. It is more important to encourage them to be brave to learn how to deal with the environment and learn to communicate with other people. It is until when they grow up to school ages that they started to know the difference
between right
and wrong. And it is at this
period the punishment
might work for the parents and teachers when they want to teach good behavior
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. However
, I do believe that the
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punishment
should be the last
method that we should considered
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For example
, we can try to ask what would they feel if other children
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? And we can tell them why Change the spelling
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right
and why something is wrong by just talking with the children
in patience. We can also
let the children
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what
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whether
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or not. The parents can also
cancel the coming gift if they keep behaving in an unpolite way. The teachers can also
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children
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