In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What Problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing Populations.

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In our contemporary era,
people
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to live more than before.
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improvement,
however
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, leads to some difficulties which should be solved. Problems and their solutions try to explain below.
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with, the improvement of expectancy
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live
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can
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in some demanding causes.
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, amenities
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as public
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may be limited.
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,
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of old
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increase as the increase of population,
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the number of chair to seat in buses, trains or other public transport are highly likely to decrease for old
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.
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, the insurance support may encounter losing qualities since increasing the age of
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may need incomes to be supplied.
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, governments’' revenue can be affected as
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may not be gotten from old
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which can face some negative monetary conditions for nations.
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for the problems mentioned above can be considered in various aspects.
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, governments can make progress in public transportations
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progressing the number of buses, trains and so on.
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, they can establish some private firms to make progress
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quality, and
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a number
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of them to prepare appropriate cases. In
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, the pressure
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this
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topic
likely
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to decrease since other private
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could help
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.
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, states should delete their revenue which will be gotten from old
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's
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. It means that, if they convert it with another source
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as getting
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from private companies, they could reduce the pressure of
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. To sum up, different causes and
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methods which can solve them are expressed completely.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average life expectancy
  • developed world
  • increase
  • individuals
  • society
  • personal goals
  • ambitions
  • quality of life
  • leisure
  • recreation
  • healthcare costs
  • challenges
  • healthcare system
  • ageing population
  • shortage
  • available workers
  • economy
  • retirement planning
  • healthy lifestyles
  • investing
  • social support systems
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