In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What Problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing Populations.
In our contemporary era,
people
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are interest
interest
to live more than before. Wrong verb form
interested
This
improvement, however
, leads to some difficulties which should be solved. Problems and their solutions try to explain below.
To begin
with, the improvement of expectancy to
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of
live
can Replace the word
life
results
in some demanding causes. Change the verb form
result
Firstly
, amenities such
as public transportations
may be limited. Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
For example
, crowd
of old Add an article
a crowd
the crowd
people
increase as the increase of population, hence
the number of chair to seat in buses, trains or other public transport are highly likely to decrease for old people
. Secondly
, the insurance support may encounter losing qualities since increasing the age of population
may need incomes to be supplied. Correct article usage
the population
Finally
, governments’' revenue can be affected as tax
may not be gotten from old people
which can face some negative monetary conditions for nations.
Solution
for the problems mentioned above can be considered in various aspects. Fix the agreement mistake
Solutions
Firstly
, governments can make progress in public transportations with
progressing the number of buses, trains and so on. Change preposition
by
Secondly
, they can establish some private firms to make progress the
quality, and Change preposition
in the
number
of them to prepare appropriate cases. In Change the article
a number
the number
other word
, the pressure Change the wording
another word
other words
of
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on
this
topic likely
to decrease since other private Add a missing verb
is likely
company
could help Fix the agreement mistake
companies
regime
. Add an article
the regime
Finally
, states should delete their revenue which will be gotten from old people
's tax
. It means that, if they convert it with another source such
as getting tax
from private companies, they could reduce the pressure of tax
.
To sum up, different causes and their
methods which can solve them are expressed completely.Change the word
the
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