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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The table illustrates the
population
 all over
world
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the world
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 from 1950 to 2050
,
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 and compared the distribution of
population
 among
differnt
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different
 areas, namely Africa, Asia, Europe, Latin America, North America and Oceania. It is noticeable that the figure
of
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world
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population
 is rapidly
increase
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 over twice as high as a year in 2000. The estimated number of people in 2050 is predicted to reach 9
billions
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 on earth, which is over three times during a period of 50 years. For the distribution of
population
 in different regions, Asia
is consistently remain
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 over half of
people
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the people
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 around the world from 1950 to 2050.
However
, the region in Africa had
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a signifcant
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signifcant
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significant
 rise over the following one hundred years, from 9% to 20%.
On the other hand
, it is obvious that the growth of
human
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humans
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 in Europe had considerably declined
over
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 10% compared to other countries, with the most distinct declining rate among six
of
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regions.
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