Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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can be divided into two types according to how they are played:

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and individual

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essay will discuss

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and

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of

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the team

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and individual

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as well as provide

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a detailed

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comparison. In my opinion,

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sports

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are better, because they are more interesting to observe due to

unpredictability

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. Individual

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are often considered better than

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player

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because

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participant’s victory is easier to monitor and it is easier to become a fan of single

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.

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, the victory of a single

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is more transparent. It is clear how the

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won

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because he is alone and

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only on himself and his skills. There is plenty of evidence in

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media that it is easier to assess an individual player

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because less unpredictable factors that obscure the responsibilities are available.

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, it is easier for spectators to form attachments to single sportsmen rather than

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. It is evident that in each sport there are fan clubs and cults dedicated to

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. Transparency and the ability to

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individuals

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are the reasons why many feel like individual

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prevail over

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sports

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there are

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many opinions on why

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sports

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are

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considered bad and toxic. These opinions include boredom,

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cast of sportsmen and

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the narcissism

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of

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.

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, individual

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may be predictable and lack the diversity of outcomes that

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sports

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have.

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,

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audience

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loose

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interests

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in

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same

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some

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individuals

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are winning the championships.

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,

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the narcissism

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of

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a single

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sportsman

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can be overwhelming to witness. Who else could withstand

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? In mass

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it is visible that sportsmen form harems of fans.

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,

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sports

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also

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have their advantages and

disadvantages

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. It is often believed that

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sports

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are more interesting, because of their

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and range of interactions between

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members.

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,

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sports

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are interesting to speculate on. Many victory factors are impossible to predict beforehand.

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, there is a growing number of betting communities forming on speculation.

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, you can see a variety

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and relations between

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players,

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making the

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play more interesting to observe. Many

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recordings suggest that some

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work in harmony and cooperation, while others can potentially fall apart

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in-game

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the game

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.

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and variety of interactions within

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the team

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what

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sports

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have been praised for.

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,

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type of sport has its

disadvantages

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.

Teams

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tend to fall apart and never come back as a

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again due to disagreements. Many examples in

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history illustrate the disappointment of fans due to their

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team

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not existing.

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, if one

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member fails

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this

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may affect other

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success at winning the match. Is it fair to lose when you are not the one making the mistakes? There are many fallen apart

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in

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history. Increasing chances of

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falling apart and dramatic

single player

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single-player

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contributions are often seen as

disadvantages

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of

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sports

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. In conclusion, both types of

sports

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have their advantages and

disadvantages

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. Individual

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are easy to monitor and form attachments to certain players, while

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being less diverse and

self-centered

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around the persona of a

sportsman

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.

Team

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sports

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are unpredictable and dynamic, though

teams

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may be fragile and fall apart easily. In my opinion,

team

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sports

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are better, because of the diversity

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members offer and

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unpredictability

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the unpredictability

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of outcomes.