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It is believed that women are more suited to child-rearing than men. What is your opinion on this issue?

#women #men
The importance of
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women
 which
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 always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject
this
 notion. The substantial influence of
this
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controversy over
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 potential impact in recent years. In my opinion,
women
 are more suited for children. Analysing the statement and explaining
further
, the
first
 and foremost reason behind
this
 is that as
women
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 birth to
child
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a child
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 and they have more
attchments
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attachments
attachment
 than men. Another striking benefit in
this
 regard is that with the help of mothers infants can get
brestfeeding
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breastfeeding
 which is most important to
child
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the child
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. Categorically discussing, men
donot
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do not
don't
 have much knowledge and time to spend with
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children
children's
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, which helps them making
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 opinion. Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reasons stems from the fact that the both parents are equally responsible to raise
child
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a child
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. Moving
further
, it is pertinent to mention that maximum
men's
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 are busy with their work because in most cases they are the sole bread earner
to
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 the family.
Moreover
, nowadays children are more focused
by
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women's
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 because she is the one who full
fill
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basic
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 needs of
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their
the
thier
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their
child
.
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 from the reasons mentioned above, it can clearly state why many are favour in
this
 trend. To recapitulate, according to the arguments
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a forementioned
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 above, one can reach to
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 that the benefits of
mother
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is
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 significant to
raise
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child
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a child
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especially
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 who spend more time
a part
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 from work with children.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • child-rearing
  • caregiver
  • social constructs
  • nurturing
  • gender roles
  • stereotypes
  • paternity leave
  • co-parenting
  • development
  • economic pressures
  • primary caregiver
  • gender biases
  • fluidity of roles
  • societal norms
  • inherent differences
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