A friend you made while you studying abroad has writen to ask you help finding a in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company thd might be suitable for himm/her. Write a letter to this your letter • tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves • say why you think the job would be suitaue for him/her • explain how to apply gor the job

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Dear Sam, I really wish that you are in high spirits. I am writing to you with respect to your letter to help you in finding a

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. You will be glad to know that I have found one, that would be best fitted for you. Let me explain it to you in detail. Recently, our company has launched a new business line focusing on FMCG products. To improve its logistics operations, the management is looking for graduates with at least 3 years of experience in the supply chain domain. The

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location is Mumbai and the qualification required is MBA in Operations which is similar to yours. The work will involve understanding the current process, finding the loopholes through root-cause analysis and providing the management with recommendations on the identified issues. I think

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can be the best workplace for you as you are currently working in similar lines and

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, you get to live with your parents in Mumbai. You can apply for the

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via the portal or you can send your resume to me so that I can refer you directly to HR. The

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Id is 186670, in case you want to go through the

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description. Let me know your thoughts on

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and if you wish to apply for it. Yours sincerely, Jen

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

221 words

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