Bringing in foreign workers to fill positions that domestic workers are unwilling to do can cause problems in the local community and should therefore be stopped. To what extent do you agree with this?
Some
people
believe that allowing outsiders from other nations and employing them within a country could cause serious issues for native people
but I completely disagree with this
notion due to the fact that a nation’s economy would be empowered whenever new talent gets hired and given an employment
opportunity.
On the one hand, every nation’s first
priority is to enhance the lifestyle and promoting
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employment
which are critical factors for economy
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the economy
however
, entrepreneurs are desperate about reducing expenses by hiring native people
but such
employees are not interested in carrying out Add an article
the job
job
due to variety of reasons like lifestyle choices, that prevent them from fulfilling their roles and responsibilities which ultimately results into poor productivity, disastrous work outcomes and financial losses. Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
Consequently
, such
situations will be alleviated whenever foreign workers have given opportunities because they possess desired skillset, domain expertise, high
potential and they are capable of carrying out jobs within the same budget as that of domestic Correct word choice
and high
employee
which would be an ideal fit for businesses. Fix the agreement mistake
employees
Moreover
, such
foreign job seekers are eagerly waiting for employment
opportunities abroad and would be willing to relocate to another country as this
would be helpful for them not only to gain experience and broaden their horizons but also
to learn foreign
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For example
, the
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Furthermore
, social relations will be strengthened by exchanging knowledge and experiences when outsiders interact & live alongside with
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people
.
It is therefore
essential to focus on implications
of employing foreign workers along with remedies. The government should work closely with employers to ensure that native citizens should not be impacted either financially or mentally while inviting & employing outsiders within a nation as Correct article usage
the implications
this
could lead to economic downfall if not managed properly. Moreover
, employers should assure that every employee’s rights are respected and preserved and they have been given equal opportunities as per their interest levels while mitigating the demand and supply of resources. The government should provide health care and education facilities to such
people
which will ensure talent retention. For instance
, New Zealand, Australia and Canada countries have provincial permanent residency immigration programs in place that not only attracts talented
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a talented
also
provides them numerous benefits including free health care & free education. Furthermore
, the
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are put
this
is not a panacea for all as people
should be qualified enough to meet the criteria of respective
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the respective
organization
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organizations
For instance
, the government of United
Kingdom has implemented internships and training programs which have empowered millions of Correct article usage
the United
people
to gain daily wages but still unemployment rate has not been nullified.
In conclusion, each corporation’s strength is strong
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a strong
their
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process
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processes
the
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employment
must be encouraged as it will help the nation and Replace the word
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people
to grow and prosper.Submitted by Mezun 2023 on
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