Bringing in foreign workers to fill positions that domestic workers are unwilling to do can cause problems in the local community and should therefore be stopped. To what extent do you agree with this?

Some
people
believe that allowing outsiders from other nations and employing them within a country could cause serious issues for native
people
but I completely disagree with
this
notion due to the fact that a nation’s economy would be empowered whenever new talent gets hired and given an
employment
opportunity. On the one hand, every nation’s
first
priority is to enhance the lifestyle and
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employment
which are critical factors for
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;
however
, entrepreneurs are desperate about reducing expenses by hiring native
people
but
such
employees are not interested in carrying out
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due to variety of reasons like lifestyle choices, that prevent them from fulfilling their roles and responsibilities which ultimately results into poor productivity, disastrous work outcomes and financial losses.
Consequently
,
such
situations will be alleviated whenever foreign workers have given opportunities because they possess desired skillset, domain expertise,
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potential and they are capable of carrying out jobs within the same budget as that of domestic
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which would be an ideal fit for businesses.
Moreover
,
such
foreign job seekers are eagerly waiting for
employment
opportunities abroad and would be willing to relocate to another country as
this
would be helpful for them not only to gain experience and broaden their horizons but
also
to learn
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cultures.
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,
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Microsoft and Google hire foreign workers frequently because they are equally capable and competent as that
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their onsite
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.
Furthermore
, social relations will be strengthened by exchanging knowledge and experiences when outsiders interact & live alongside
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domestic
people
. It is
therefore
essential to focus on
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of employing foreign workers along with remedies. The government should work closely with employers to ensure that native citizens should not be impacted either financially or mentally while inviting & employing outsiders within a nation as
this
could lead to economic downfall if not managed properly.
Moreover
, employers should assure that every employee’s rights are respected and preserved and they have been given equal opportunities as per their interest levels while mitigating the demand and supply of resources. The government should provide health care and education facilities to
such
people
which will ensure talent retention.
For instance
, New Zealand, Australia and Canada countries have provincial permanent residency immigration programs in place that not only attracts
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crowd but
also
provides them numerous benefits including free health care & free education.
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,
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unemployment is the most common issue for each nation and it can be resolved when
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education and training programs
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into place but
this
is not a panacea for all as
people
should be qualified enough to meet the criteria of
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organization
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.
For instance
, the government of
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Kingdom has implemented internships and training programs which have empowered millions of
people
to gain daily wages but still unemployment rate has not been nullified. In conclusion, each corporation’s strength is
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workforce and
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success depends on healthy work culture, excellent throughput, collaboration, cultural diversity along with optimistic thought
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. In fact,
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foreign
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must be encouraged as it will help the nation and
people
to grow and prosper.
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