Nowadays, some people believe that fashion is very important for youngsters and it has negative impact on the people and society. Do you agree or disagree with statement?

In recent times, the modern trend comes and influents many teenagers around the world, it is an improved

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appearance

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appearance

of

fashion

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era while some realize that it has a negative impact on

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and human beings. From these statements, I agree that will have a bad impact

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structural

social

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and

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essay I will discuss

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subsequent paragraph below.

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Firts

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of all, juveniles will pursue their new style

according

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the trends without considering

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their parents' finance to spend much money to reach their

offsprings

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as they believe that

the

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fashion

is everything to present their appearance in public's attracted.

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parents feel a big pressure with

this

condition as they need more income to equip

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, especially

for

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their

children

. To cite an example, almost

children

tend to

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maintain

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and exist with their social media to update new information related to

fashion

,

as a result

, many

children

prefer

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maintaining

mantaining

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maintaining

their style with new

fashion

than keeping their attitude and

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in public or sosmed.

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to

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, the new

fashion

forces people to adjust with him in all

of

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the situation

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situation

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to reach a good impression from

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, but it is not

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. Public societies realize that every trend will affect

children

to follow it and they can reject that but it could be difficult for their

offsprings

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to avoid every new era as they are a gold generation who has to adapt

with

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every situation. From

this

,

children

will ignore the important parts of life that are boosting

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and showing

good

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attitude. To sum up, juveniles tend to force their condition to get a good value from

public

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but it is

wrong

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perception and parents will be

more

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pressure with their

financial economic

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to fulfil their

offsprings'

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desire

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. A bad moral will be ignored by

children

who prefer maintaining their

fashion

than

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attitude on social media and

public

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.