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Some people say that the computer is an integral part of modern education. Everything can be taught and learnt better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With the progress of technology, people now can use
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 to achieve a variety of tasks
such
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 benefits and drawbacks of it. On the one hand, some parents argue that
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computers would cause a lot of
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children
. For young
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surrounding which is full of electronic devices, their eyes might have some problems.
In addition
, it is easy to distract young
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computers to learn.
For example
, they might keep opening other pages to browse or play. There are a lot of
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also
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children
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 for learning
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 early age.
On the other hand
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abundance
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 of benefits for
children
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computers for learning. One of the advantages is the convenience. By learning on the Internet, not only
children
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also
 their parents can
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 a lot of time, because they do not need to go to
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real tuition
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. The other benefit is that there is a huge amount of information on the Internet, people can gain whatever they want through searching on the Internet.
Therefore
, people can become repositories of
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knowledge
 if they access the information in an effective way. In conclusion, as far as I am concerned,
although
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outweigh
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outweigh
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drawbacks
. We should definitely take good advantage of using
this
 powerful and convenient tool.
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