The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps compare
to
the present Norbiton industrial area and the planned future development of the site.
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It is clear that
the river is on the north side
of the map with the farmland in the front,
and the town on the east. There was a rounded junction in the centre connected to the two main roads. The road to the east Remove the comma
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side
has a number of factories surrounding by
it.
The future plan of Norbiton will change significantly, the river will be Change preposition
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separate
by the new road and the farmland is occupied by housing and moving to the right Replace the word
separated
side
. The factories beside the road are going to be replaced by housing with shops in the west-east and the medical centre on the opposite.
There will also
build a playground on the opposite side
of the farmland while
the school will be constructed on the east side
.
Overall
, Norbiton industrial area is going to develop into the
modern living city, only the town will not be moved in the future.Correct article usage
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