As the graduation day draws near, you have to apply for a library card for your graduate thesis. Write a letter to the person in charge of the library. In your letter Explain your situation Inquire about to the required materials and the required procedures Express your thanks

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apply for a

library

card

. I am currently working on my graduate thesis. The professor requires us to read a couple of reference books before starting writing the thesis. I checked online that all the books can be borrowed from your

library

Therefore

, I decide to apply for a

library

card

. I would be grateful if you could tell me the required materials for the application for a

library

card

. Because my thesis will be due

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apply

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month, I would like to get my

library

card

and start reading the books as soon as possible. Please let me know all the procedures for

application

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the application

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, and I will get all the materials ready and file my application. I would like to express my gratitude to you for helping me to apply for the

library

card

. It means a lot to me. Yours sincerely, Ada

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