Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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including dirty work or shortage of money. But some
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it is not true. But personally, I disagree
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environment and you won't leave
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, generally, people need a goal for living. if you don't have a goal or
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, you will get tired soon and it is not good for your health.
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, it is true that we often work much harder when we are in harsh
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. Difficulty helps us to have
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, staying in
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. It is So sometimes we should experience harsh
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to avoid them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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