The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The
three
pie charts indicate that
average percentages Correct determiner usage
the
three
nutrients Change preposition
of three
of
typical meals.
First of all, the percentages of Change preposition
in
three
ingredients we consume for Breakfast are almost the same. Saturated fat and Added Correct article usage
the three
sugar
are 16% and Sodium
is 14%. However
, the rate of three
nutrients differ
depending on meals. Added Change the verb form
differs
sugar
at Dinner
is nearly 2 times smaller than both Saturated fat and Sodium
in
Change preposition
at
Dinner
. Moreover
, Snacks
has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
2
times bigger rate than Correct article usage
a 2
Sodium
and Saturated fat in Snacks
.
Secondly
, each element has a large dominant such
as Sodium
in Dinner
, Saturated fat in Dinner
, Added
Correct word choice
and Added
sugar
in Snacks
. 43%, 37%, 42% each. which means we eat nutrientally
unbalanced food almost every meal. And Correct your spelling
nutrient-ally
Dinner
occupies larger fields in comparison to other meals except
Added Add the preposition
forexcept
sugar
.
overall
, we take rich Sodium
and Saturated fat in Dinner
and sugar
in Snacks
.But in general, we consume almost the same amount of these three
ingredients in Breakfast.Submitted by shunsuke.takagi.5u on
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