The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three

types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant
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The
three
pie charts indicate
that
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the
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average percentages
three
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of three
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nutrients
of
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in
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typical meals. First of all, the percentages of
three
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the three
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ingredients we consume for Breakfast are almost the same. Saturated fat and Added
sugar
are 16% and
Sodium
is 14%.
However
, the rate of
three
nutrients
differ
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differs
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depending on meals. Added
sugar
at
Dinner
is nearly 2 times smaller than both Saturated fat and
Sodium
in
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at
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Dinner
.
Moreover
,
Snacks
has
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have
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2
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a 2
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times bigger rate than
Sodium
and Saturated fat in
Snacks
.
Secondly
, each element has a large dominant
such
as
Sodium
in
Dinner
, Saturated fat in
Dinner
,
Added
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and Added
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sugar
in
Snacks
. 43%, 37%, 42% each. which means we eat
nutrientally
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nutrient-ally
unbalanced food almost every meal. And
Dinner
occupies larger fields in comparison to other meals
except
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forexcept
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Added
sugar
.
overall
, we take rich
Sodium
and Saturated fat in
Dinner
and
sugar
in
Snacks
.But in general, we consume almost the same amount of these
three
ingredients in Breakfast.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words three, sugar, sodium, dinner, snacks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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