As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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of people are of the belief that in the conditions of being at work in
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accomplishment
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while explaining what factors for
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satisfaction are, and
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how realistic they are. On the one hand, interest in
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factor accounts for motivation. In
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how rewarding the
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is, leads to individuals' enthusiasm;
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it is an undeniable fact that money is the most vital
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, there are justifiably a number of people who believe that everyone
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certain
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expectations which they need to maintain in order to attain a sense of
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accomplishment
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anticipating a reasonable amount of wage is a great example of that. Another realistic factor for
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satisfaction is involvement . Being a member of a team, every soul
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being acknowledged.
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sense of being able to make a
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providing that distinction is positive
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is considered to be
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. A most recent survey showed that individuals who were more included in a system
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expressed more contentment
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their occupation. In a nutshell, I strongly believe that due to passion; meaning deep interest
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and being rewarding one could expect
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satisfaction.
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being anticipated and included
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reasonable
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paycheck are some
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to measure
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expectation
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expectations
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in some people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job satisfaction
  • wellbeing
  • contribute
  • meaningful work
  • work-life balance
  • career progression
  • workplace environment
  • recognition
  • constructive feedback
  • compensation
  • benefits
  • job security
  • autonomy
  • skills match
  • interests match
  • variety
  • challenge
  • economic conditions
  • labor market
  • individual expectations
  • job role
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