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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own

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Some people are of
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 that
that
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they should embrace a difficult as it is, others argue that they should strive to improve their condition. I believe in
latter
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the latter
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 opinion because no matter how hard the situation is, we should always find
a
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room for improvement.
This
 essay will discuss both
point
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 of
views
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view
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.
To begin
 with, unsatisfactory
job
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jobs
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 and poor financial
status
 are
one
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of
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the major problems for working families. If one is not satisfied with their
job
,
then
 they should do something about it. Either they should look for alternative
job
 opportunities or discuss
this
 matter with their supervisors. Change is always a good thing whether
if
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it comes in leaving your comfort zone or
associated
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 with risks, one should avail
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yourself it
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.
Although
,
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 wanting to get a
job
 that satisfies you comes with a lot of
risk
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, it still is
the
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 risk worth taking. If a person is working day and night to meet their needs end,
then
 they should expect a good reward for their hard work. Other people argue that they should maintain their
status
 no matter the situation. They don’t do anything to change their given
status
 quo. They believe that the situation they’re in is like a test
to
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 them.
However
, if actions are not taken
then
 they get stuck in
this
 endless loop of
lower paying
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 incomes. In conclusion, always work hard to change your current
status
 whether
its
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job
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a job
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 or low salary.
Although
, running after materialistic things is not considered healthy but some people have higher hopes in life so they should be given a chance.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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